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Menopausal Bi-Polar Witch Babbling

Saturday, December 18, 2004

This will be a rather long post as I need some feed back, Lynn, age 46, the herione of my story finds herself in Scotland, she has had a very rough year. She has been treated very badly by men her whole life, and her husband has walked out on her for a much younger woman. She is befriended by a small group of actors who happen to be in the area filming. The group consists of British actress Glenda Johns, American actor Gary Richards, (who is half her age and has developed a crush on Lynn) and Britsh actor Adam Olmun (13 years her senior, whom Lynn has fallen in love with). This first excerpt takes place after supper at the house the actors share. It is the first kiss between Adam and Lynn.
Adam sat behind her near the fire and put his arms around her, she leaned into him. She could feel his warmth, felt his breath on the back of her neck, she was feeling flushed. She hastily got up and went into the kitchen saying that she needed some water. She really needed to compose herself. She sat back on the counter top trying to control her breathing and calm herself down when he came in. He saw that she was still flushed and smiled. He went to her, she wouldn't look up. He gently lifted her face and looked into her eyes, they betrayed what she was feeling. He moved closer, "what's wrong?" he asked quietly, "nothing, I just got warm" she replied as his lips moved closer to hers. He brushed her lips lightly, gently with his own, she began to tremble slightly in anticipation. "Your trembling" he whispered, teasing her lips as he spoke. "Yes" she whispered back, her lips slightly parted, her breathing and pulse quickening. He was taking his time, it was exquisite torture. When she thought she could endure no more, he gently and firmly kissed her. His arms went about her waist as she slid hers about his neck, his tongue sweetly exploring, tasting her. She kissed him back, exploring and tasting him, her body felt electrified, what was he doing to her. She had never felt like this before, she didn't want it to stop. She felt his kiss becoming deeper, more passionate and she responded, her body felt like it was on fire. He pulled her closer, held her tighter, she could feel his excitement, she felt him getting hard against her thigh. Suddenly he broke away, he looked at her, "you have to leave" he said. He walked away and she heard a door slam. Lynn sat there trying to comprehend what had just happened. She was feeling confused, hurt, humiliated, near tears she quietly walked into the living room and asked Gary to take her home.
Adam sat on the edge of his bed, tears in his eyes. Never had a woman responded to him as she had, so openly, so willingly, so passionately. He knew she would have given herself to him fully. He wanted her more than he had ever wanted anything in his life. He had to push away from her or he would have taken her to his bed then and there. Why did he kiss her? It was too soon, she still grieved the loss of her family, she was still vulnerable. He had wanted to take away her pain and instead he had caused her more, all because he couldn't control himself.
Question - Was that descriptive enough? What about his internal dialog? Suggestions?

This next part takes place after she decides to give Gary a chance, that he could help her forget. Knowing that it wont be anything long term. This is where the first actual sex scenes take place, they were the most diffucult to write. The same questions will apply.

Gary was ecstatic as he walked her home, "take your time" he reminded him self. He knew what her life had been like and he wanted to please her, to pleasure her over and over. They had no sooner closed the door than he had her in his arms, his kiss was deep, passionate and hungry. She was surprised that she was just as hungry for him, she didn't know if it was from the Champaign, the fact that she hadn't been with a man in so long or if it was because of Adams rejection, she didn't care, Lynn gave herself over to the moment. They didn't make past the dining table, she didn't remember her clothing coming off. Gary was considerate, he paid attention to her responses. He kissed and licked her neck and throat as he massaged her breasts. He teased her nipples with his tongue and gently nibbled them with his teeth and sucked them causing her to moan with pleasure. He raised up and kissed her again. His hands exploring her body. He moved down between her legs to taste her, causing her to gasp and waves of pleasure to wash over her. The moment he entered her she almost came again, she loved the size of him. She matched his thrusts, deep, fiery, animalistic. She felt the waves washing over her again, her body began to spasm as she came. Gary stopped and pulled her on top of him so that she straddled him on the dining chair, she began to ride him slowly as he kissed her passionately. He fondled her breasts and held her to him. She began to move faster and faster, she could feel the waves building again, and she could hear him beginning to moan. The spasms were beginning in her again as she came, he could hold back no longer and kissed her hard as he exploded inside her. Gary was young, and it wasn't long before he wanted her again. He wanted her over and over, he couldn't get enough of her. No surface in the cottage was safe. The sun was coming up when they finally lay exhausted, in each others arms. When she woke, he was gone, she felt a moment of disapointment. She stretched, she had never felt so relaxed, she got up and showered, brushed her teeth and put on her robe, she didn't feel like getting dressed yet. As she came out of the bedroom, her back door opened, there was Gary, grinning with a tray of food and some coffee, she smiled and went over to help him. "good morning" she said "good afternoon" he said kissing her. "I thought you might be hungry." "Ravenous" she said with a twinkle in her eye, surprised at herself, for wanting him again already. He took her in his arms, nuzzled her neck and said "I'll have to see what I can do about that." It seems that Gary, with his care and consideration in wanting to pleasure her, had awakened a passion in Lynn that she hadn't known existed and she couldn't get enough of him. "You better eat first" Lynn said laughing as she pushed Gary away, "you need to keep up your strength." She sat across the table from him and began to eat her breakfast. She was in a playful mood that morning. She ate very slowly and deliberately making each bite almost sensuous. She picked up a sausage from the plate with her fingers and very slowly began to nibble on it. The grease making her lips wet, she slowly licked and sucked her fingers clean, Gary sat transfixed. She dropped her napkin and disappeared under the table to retrieve it. He felt her hands undoing his pants and he lifted up so that she could slide them down. He felt her grasp his already hard shaft in one hand and cup his sack gently in the other, then he felt a warm wetness as she ran her tongue along the length of him, he shuddered. She teased him with her tongue and her lips, gliding them along the length of his shaft, running her tongue in circles around the head, pumping him with her hands. She was driving him wild, then she took him into her mouth and he felt suction. He grabbed hold of the table, he had nearly lost control. With her hands and mouth she was giving him such pleasure he wasn't sure how long he could last, he could feel it building within him. His hips began to move on their own, he began to moan, faster she moved, he was losing control, she drank all he could give her. When Gary finally stopped shaking, Lynn returned to her chair as if nothing happened, took a sip of coffee and with a playful smile on her face she asked "so how was your breakfast?" He looked at her, a grin spread across his face as he removed the rest of his clothing, "I'll let you know" he said as he chased her into the bedroom laughing.

Broomhilda worshipped the goddess at 9:53 AM